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Distant Star:

Episode Two-

Far Future


By W. A. Patterson





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Copyright 2010 W. A. Patterson


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DISTANT STAR- EPISODE 2 - FAR FUTURE? - TEASER


FADE IN:


INT. MAX'S APARTMENT - DAY


MAX DEIL sits at a desk working at his computer. Behind him we can see the rest of his apartment is untouched by order or cleanliness. In short, Max is a slob or a typical male with no females due to arrive soon.


FX: DOORBELL RINGS


Reluctantly Max gets up from his desk and goes to the door. We can see now that his clothes are dirty, his hair unwashed and a mess. When he opens the door he sees a dapperly dressed and polite looking man bearing a briefcase. This man is DOUG BROWN. He is a salesman, of a sort.


MAX

Yes? Can I help you?


DOUG

Of course you can Mr. Deil! It is Mr.

Maxwell Deil isn't it? Or is it Max?


MAX

Yes. I'm Max Deil, but I don't know who

you are Mr. ... ?


DOUG

Oh me? I'm Doug, Doug Brown.


MAX

Well Mr. Brown, I-


DOUG

(interrupts)

Just Doug please, no need to stand on

Ceremony.


MAX

Well, Doug, I'm afraid I have no idea

what you're doing here. ... I have no

money so I can't buy anything, and I

don't ever remember meeting you.


DOUG

Well, Max, I'm a salesman, but I'm not

here to sell you electric butter-knives

or self-tying shoe-laces or anything

like that. I'm actually here to offer

you a job.


Max looks at Doug in disbelief, and then takes the card Doug hands him, looking at it, and unconsciously backing away from the door as he does so. Quick as a blink, Doug steps inside and looks around.


Max notices this and then Steps back to block Doug's way farther into the apartment.


DOUG

This is so fascinating. How can you fit

so much clutter in such a small place

Max?


Max looks around and notices the sty his apartment has become.


MAX

I don't think its that bad.


DOUG

Oh, this place is positively Rancid!

When's the last time you took out the

garbage?


MAX

Last week sometime. What's it to you?


DOUG

Well, Max, although the job I have in

mind for you has no particular need for

tidiness, I do like to know the people

I'm hiring as well as I can.

(looks around again)

It looks like you're more of an

abstract-random sort of character.


Doug gently pushes Max out of the way and Max takes a

second to look at the card.


CUT TO:



CARD- CLOSE UP


DOUG BROWN- AXIS SYSTEMS- CHICAGONOIS- NORTH AMERICA


MAX

Chicago-nois? Where the hell is that?


DOUG

Oh, You'd call it Chicago Max. It was

in the state of Illinois until the city

grew big enough to reach City-State

Status. They usually change the name

at that time, except for New York, They

were the first so they never changed

it.


MAX

City State? What's going on here?


Doug looks in Surprise at Max, then recalls something, slapping his forehead as he does so.


DOUG

Sorry, I'm being foolish again. I

forget that they restore your mind

without remembering anything. ... You

died in 1999 Max. Your body was Frozen

in Cryonic Suspension. You remember

signing up for that?

(Max nods)

Its now the Year 2837 and your body is

about to be revived. I'm here to see if

you want to work for me and see if

paying to have you thawed out is worth

the cost.


Max Looks to Doug for a moment and then at the apartment around him, then laughs.


MAX

That's funny Doug, but not quite funny

enough. Who put you up to this? Was it

Russell?


DOUG

Russell? ... Who's- ... OH! I get it!

You think this is a Joke! Sure! That

happens almost every time. ... Well

watch this.


Doug claps his hands twice and then gestures around him. Max looks and sees that the trashed apartment is now spotlessly clean and tidy.


DOUG

This is a computer simulation Max. Its

not real. But what is real is the fact

that is that you're dead and you can be

resurrected if you want.


Max looks at Doug for a few seconds and then faints away completely, his head making a nice THUNK as it hits the floor.


FADE OUT:



DISTANT STAR- EPISODE 2 - FAR FUTURE? - ACT I.


FADE IN:


ANNOUNCER (V.O.)

There are a hundred-billion stars in

our Galaxy alone. There are more

planets around more than just around

our own star. There may be life on some

of those planets. And with that life

come their own stories.

(beat)

It doesn't matter how many legs or eyes

the story teller has. It doesn't matter

what color is their sun. All that

matters now is that they have a story

to tell you. Listen close and you might

hear the message they are trying to

send from their own Distant Star.



INT. MAX'S APARTMENT - DAY


Max now lies on the couch and Doug sits on the arm waiting for him to wake. When he does, Doug only smiles and hands him a glass of water.


DOUG

Here. Drink this and take a few deep

breaths. It'll help clear your head.


Max does as he's told as he sits up and looks around. Much of the furniture has been cleaned or removed entirely. The computer and entire desk and desk chair are now missing. The bed is made but sits without pillows.


MAX

I must have fainted. My head hurts.


DOUG

You smacked it pretty hard on the floor

there. ... I know that this is a

virtual reality but without a little

pain it all gets a bit stale after

about a day or so.


MAX

Why virtual reality? If I'm dead why

not just revive my body?


DOUG

Its not that simple Max. The world

population is now around 17 billion

people. Resources are in prime demand

and its all the colonies in space and

the recycling plants can do to keep up

and keep everyone fed.


Doug stands and stretches then looks around before continuing.


DOUG

Poverty has been entirely wiped out,

but with it, we've had to wipe out

nearly the entire lower classes. We

don't have poor people because we

simply don't allow them to be born.

(beat)

Also, since we can't afford a

population of malcontents or

unemployable, our society tends to

freeze the crippled and the sick and

the lazy or criminal to let them live

in Virtual Realities like this one

where the only resource they use is

very little power.


Max stands and goes to the window, looking at the world outside. We can see it looks normal in all respects and Dan opens the window experimentally.


DOUG

You won't find any inconsistencies

between reality and the virtual here.

We've had over 700 years to perfect the

technology. In fact, you share this

same reality with over 5 billion other

frozen minds as well, but you won't

ever meet any of them if you don't want

to.


MAX

So what's the point in reviving anyone

at all? If this is easier why doesn't

everyone just freeze themselves and

save the resources?


DOUG

Well, someone has to keep things

running in reality, and even if we let

people live thier fantasy lives here,

it becomes stale after awhile. There

is no substitute for reality Max.


MAX

So why haven't you imposed breeding

limits and limited the number of births

each year.


DOUG

Oh we did Max, we did. We even imposed

a death penalty for Jay-walking at one

time but it didn't do any good. The

problem isn't that people are born each

day. the problem is that no one seems

to really die anymore.


MAX

Then what about colonies in space?


DOUG

Think about it Max. If we could put

over a million people in orbit each

day, where would we get the resources

to build all the ships to take them

anywhere? We've been trying to terra-

form Mars, but they have the same

population problem that we have. No one

dies so the population just keeps

growing.


Max takes a seat and another drink of water, trying to digest all this.


MAX

OK. I think I get what you're saying

here. I just don't understand one

thing.


DOUG

And what would that be Max?


MAX

Why would you revive me? I'm at least

700 years out of date and I'm sure I'd

be pretty much useless to you as

anything more than as a janitor.


Doug laughs long and hard at this, uncontrollably doubling up as he does so. tears run down his face as he tries to regain his composure.


DOUG

I'm sorry Max. What you just said just

struck me as funny.


MAX

Why is that?


DOUG

Well, for one thing we have robots

available to clean everything, and for

another, we wouldn't revive anyone that

would be useless.

(beat)

In fact, we a Axis systems think that

you have a very great potential to be

quite useful to us.


Max Looks to Doug and seems to have nothing to say.


MAX

How?


DOUG

Well, first I have to ask you some

questions and you need to be completely

honest with me. You shouldn't be

worried about recriminations as all

statues of limitations have run out on

any crimes you may have committed in

the past. You have no need to be

dishonest with me here. ... Do you

think you can do that?


MAX

I think I can, but why should I?


DOUG

Because Max, If you are honest with me

now, it will help make a favorable

decision on how useful you can be to my

company.


MAX

OK. I think I can understand that.


DOUG

Good. I really have only one question,

but it was about a slightly criminal

operation in your past. At the time

you wee employed for a large software

developer. I think you know the company

I am speaking of, don't you?


MAX

Yes. MicroTek. Up until a half hour ago

I thought I still worked there.


DOUG

Yes, well, about that- ... At the time

of your employment at MicroTek, there

was a particularly nasty computer virus

being distributed with almost every

piece of software sold. You remember

that virus.


MAX

(smiles widely)

The Mad Hatter Virus. Yes, I remember

that one.


DOUG

Yes, I thought you would. do you know

why this virus was so nasty?


MAX

Oh sure. It was a few months before

they figured out that the virus never

was installed in a computer system in

one peice.

You had to install certain programs

before the virus became active and then

it would take over your computer. It

would get on the internet and send all

your information to a server somewhere

that the hacker could access whenever

they wanted to.


DOUG

That's correct. ... You seem to have a

good idea of how well this program

worked.


MAX

That's because I wrote it. ... That's

what you were going to ask me right?


DOUG

Yes, it was.


MAX

Well, I don't see any reason to hide it

now. I wrote it. Any other questions

Doug?


DOUG

Why did you write such a program Max?


MAX

Because even though MicroTek had a

Stock listing in the Billions of

dollars, they failed to tell their

investors that their pension funds and

almost all accounts had been mishandled

almost since the company started. Only

a se4lect few who had the intelligence

to dig deep enough knew about it, and

the top dogs at the company spent 90%

of their time hiding it.

(beat)

I spent ten years with MicroTek and

while on paper I was worth millions, it

was only a matter of month before the

truth came out and the stock options I

had wouldn't be worth their weight in

tissue paper.

(beat)

I created the Mad Hatter Virus and to

build a little nest egg for myself and

my fellow employees. The main reason I

created the virus was to access the

mainframe and the computer records of

the big dogs themselves. ... I used it

to find out where the money that was

supposed to go to the employees went,

and managed to return it to the proper

place in most cases.


Max stops talking now and gets a blank look on his face as he recalls something.


DOUG

Yes Max. You seem to be recalling

something.


MAX

Yes. I do. I just remembered. I got

fired from Microtek shortly after that.

... In fact, I remember moving to

Montana and hiding from the same big

dogs of the company who wanted my

blood.


DOUG

And why was that?


MAX

Because, even though the FBI never

found out who made Mad Hatter, Microtek

did. They didn't turn me in because of

why I did it, but they weren't exactly

used to operating legally anyway.

(pause)

Several of the executives at the

company promised me I wouldn't live to

enjoy my retirement. ... I took the

threat seriously.


Doug rises and then opens his briefcase, quickly pulling out a thick contract and handing it to Max.


DOUG

Well, thank you for your Honesty Max. I

am now convinced that you are the right

man for the job. ... I have no qualms

in offering you this employment

contract.


Max takes the contract and then starts to look it over.


MAX

I'm sorry to seem so stupid Doug, but I

still have no idea what I could do for

you that would be worth anything.


DOUG

Oh, well, I'm sure you can figure it

out if you tried, Max. After all, the

only real change in computers is that

they are much faster now. Sure the

language is different, but the concepts

are still the same.


Max looks at Doug and then at the contract. Doug starts to leave but Max grabs his arm and keeps him from leaving. When Doug faces him he hands the contract back to him.


MAX

I can't take this Mr. Brown. I'm not a

hacker, I'm a systems analyst and

network administrator. I can't take a

job making viruses.


Doug Looks at the contract then hands it back to Max.


DOUG

Keep this Max. I'm sure you'll find

that signing it will be the best

decision you've ever made.


Doug smiles evilly and then walks out the door, closing it behind him.


Max looks at the door for a few seconds and then looks at the contract, crumpling it up into a ball and then turning to toss it away. When he does he stops dead in his tracks.


We see it a second later.


The entire apartment is empty and only a lone NEON PHONE sits in the middle of the floor. The windows are black and the only light comes from the overhead lamp.


The phone begins to ring and flash. Reluctantly Max walks toward it, letting the contract fall to the floor.


MAX

Hello?


DOUG (O.S.)

Hello Max. One thing I forgot to

mention,... Axis Systems happens to own

the contract for your virtual reality.

If you won't play ball with us, then

I'm afraid I can't justify the expense

of keeping you in a top of the line

reality indefinitely. ... Although our

own contract now states we have to keep

you conscious and aware, I'm afraid

that beyond that it doesn't specify how

much energy we have to expend to keep

you that way.


MAX

So I don't play ball and write the

virus programs you want, then I live in

a darkened room, alone and forgotten

forever? Is that it Doug?


DOUG

(laughs)

You got it in one Max! I was right

about you! You're smart as a whip!


MAX

You're right Doug. I am. And I'm tough

as nails too. Do your worst Doug. I

won't write the virus programs for you.


Max hangs up the phone, then takes a seat on the floor. Taking the wadded up contract he pulls it to him then lays down, placing the contract under his head for a cushion.


The phone rings again. After a short time Max answers again, not speaking but holding the headset to his ear.


DOUG (O.S.)

You are right Max. You are tough as

nails, and I will do my worst. You will

write the programs for me Max. Either

that or you'll beg me to kill you.


Max hangs up the phone and then yanks the cord out of the wall and tosses it away.


Suddenly a loud ticking begins to fill the room and Max looks up to find a clock on the wall that seems to get impossibly louder with every second.


The clock reads less than a minute to Midnight.


The second hand sweeps to the twelve.


When it hits a THUNDEROUS BONGING of a bell SCREAMS Through the room! Max reels in pain, his hands to his ears to block out the pain the Bonging is causing.


As the bonging continues Doug can be heard over the noise.


DOUG

You will work for me Max! You will or I

will drive you insane. Its that Simple

Max! Make your choice wisely!

(beat)

And this clock gongs the hour every 15

minutes!


We exit as Max collapses to the floor and we hear Doug Laughing maniacally as we


FADE OUT:


DISTANT STAR- EPISODE 2 - FAR FUTURE? - ACT II.


FADE IN:


INT. MAX'S APARTMENT - NIGHT


Max lays on the floor, fitfully asleep. On the side of his head we can see where blood has run from his damaged ear drums down his face. He is still unwashed but now the slovenliness looks more like a prisoner of war than as a compu-slob.


The door begins to knock quietly, but soon grows more insistent as It continues. Max stirs from his place on the floor and we can see from his beard that it has been some time since we saw him last.


As he moves toward the door it becomes painfully obvious that Max has suffered and carries this weariness in his bones from the way he walks.


He opens the door to see only a black area outside with a young woman, GAIL, standing outside patiently.


GAIL

Max Deil?


MAX

(slurred)

Yes.


GAIL

Good to meet you Max. Doug asked me to

step in and come talk to you.... I

imagine that you may have some

questions and I am sure I have some

things to tell you that you may find

important.


Max does not close the door but grabs Gail by the arm as she enters the apartment and forces her back out the door.


MAX

I won't do it! I won't kill all those

people! I WON'T DO IT!


With that he slams the door in Gail's astonished face and then leans his head against the door for a moment. Soon the clicking of shoes on the floor make him spin around to look behind him.


There in the once empty apartment is now a small table with cool drinks waiting in between two lounge chairs. Gail takes and seat, and sipping from a drink waves for Max to take up the vacant one on the other side of the table.


GAIL

Come on now Max. I'm sure you've

figured out by now that you can't get

rid of me that easily. you might as

well enjoy a little break.


Max drops his shoulders resigning himself to the intrusion and shuffles emptily to the vacant chair, taking a small sip of the drink beside him.


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